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New part up!

Now... that's more to my liking. Despite tons of work in the office, I managed to finish another part in about five weeks. :-)

It can be found at:

http://www.gundamwingtales.com/novel2/chapter1_part3_4.html

Pending are the comments from my beta reader.

And again, a few notes:

- there's a whole scene here which is not in the book, namely the dialogue between Zechs and Noin, when Zechs ask her to escort Relena. Very nicely done me thinks, it does fill a hole. And we get to learn that Noin has somebody to follow Relena around.
- Then, did anybody notice what is NOT in the book? Yes, the entire Alex and Mueller story. Frankly, I don't miss it one bit, when I saw that series for the first time, I was wondering already what it was good for, except showing that there were less than noble elements in OZ. Or to show off Zechs' noble character better.

Else, the book follows the episode very closely.

Now, on to the next chapter... where Heero and Trowa meet up with Sylvia Noventa.

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